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Thursday, January 11, 2018

Emergence 3.0 - Section One, Jim and Kathy; Part One, A Private Sorrow; Chapter Four, Closure

Emergence 3.0
A Novel – One Page Per Day
Day 011, Thursday
January 11th, 2018

Chapter Four: Closure

Kathy sensed the emptiness inside her friend. She did not require psychic powers or telepathy to experience it. She only needed the normal human attribute of empathy.

Today there was something hollowed out inside him, where normally what she found in him was an active awareness, quick and sharp. Nothing escaped his attention. And he approached every moment that she had ever been with him, with a degree of perceptivity that outstripped her own.

She knew that he was not gifted in the same way that she was. The two of them had never spoken of it, but that was something she knew.

He was unique, like her they were both unique.  

Her time with him this morning; it was dismaying to her, and she wanted to comfort him. She wanted to shake him up, or trap him in a conversation that would force him to reveal something.

He was elusive.

He could see the play she was making from a distance. It left her with the sense that she was the one being played.

Kathy never felt disadvantaged. Not since she was a child.

She was always holding the cards, but that was not true in consideration of her time with Jim.

He was the master, and she was the pupil, always.

There was something in Jim’s behavior that reminded her of the times when people that had been deeply involved in her life were saying goodbye, like her parents, those few of her teachers that she genuinely loved.

Of course she knew what was happening with them before they ever said a word. That was her gift. Nevertheless they behaved a certain way, and had specific mannerisms that formed a pattern over time.

Kathy thought she saw that pattern reveal itself in Jim today, and just the thought that she might lose him filled her with despair. It activated a spirit inside her that forced her to want to discover the truth and challenge the things she did not want happen, so that they would not.

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Sunday, January 15, 2017

Emergence In Fifty-five Words Section One, Jim and Kathy; Part One, A Private Sorrow, Collected Chapters





Emergence 2.0
A Novel – In 55 Words a Day
Day 008, January 8th, 2017

Chapter One: Call

Kathy answered the telephone; “hello.”

“I need to see you;” said Jim, without preamble, in his typical-detached tone, as remote as Mount Everest.

“Café?” He asked; pensive and hesitant.

“Yes.” Kathy replied; trying to mask the concern welling up inside of her.

Jim hung up the phone without further comment.

Kathy got ready to go.

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Emergence 2.0
A Novel – In 55 Words a Day
Day 009, January 9th, 2017

Chapter Two: Morning

“Small coffee,” Jim orders.

“Soy chai;” says Kathy.

They sit at the table in the sun, and read the newspaper. In that, at least; this day is like any other morning. The café is busy. They are together, but not.

Jim begins to weep.

“What is wrong with you?” Kathy asks.

He won’t say why.

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Emergence 2.0
A Novel – In 55 Words a Day
Day 010, January 10th, 2017

Chapter Three: Lies

Kathy looked at Jim for a long time, observing him. She watched him as he sat at their table with the newspaper folded in his hands.

“Jim…what is wrong?” She asked.

“I cannot say.”

“Why?”

“You would not understand if I did…I’m not talking about it.”

“I do not get it.”

“I said as much.”

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Emergence 2.0
A Novel – In 55 Words a Day
Day 011, January 11th, 2017

Chapter Four: Closure

Kathy sensed the emptiness inside her friend. She did not require psychic powers or telepathy to experience it. There was a hollowness inside of him, where normally there was an active awareness, a quick sharpness, and deep perceptivity.

Her time with him this morning, it was dismaying to her, and she wanted to comfort him.

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Emergence 2.0
A Novel – In 55 Words a Day
Day 012, January 12th, 2017

Chapter Five: Confusion

Now that she was here, sitting at the table across from him, Jim was unsure of his motive, of why he asked her to see him. What difference would it make?

The plan he had enacted would proceed. He could not tell her what was about to happen. It was vital that she be surprised.

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Emergence 2.0
A Novel – In 55 Words a Day
Day 013, January 13th, 2017

Chapter Six: Insight

Jim was pensive. It was clear to Kathy that he had something to say to her. She sensed it was bad news, for her, and for everyone. If it had been anyone other than Jim, she would have known, he would not have had to say anything.

Jim was unique, she could not read him.

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Emergence 2.0
A Novel – In 55 Words a Day
Day 014, January 14th, 2017

Chapter Seven: Liminality

They sat with one another, speaking little.

Jim enjoyed being with Kathy, the rhythm of her mind, his thoughts in syncopation with hers. It felt like he was home, and it was the closest thing to his natural state of being that he had ever experienced during the long years that he had been away.

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Emergence:
Section One, Jim and Kathy
Part One, A Private Sorrow,

Collected Chapters

01 Call
02 Morning
03 Lies
04 Closure
05 Confusion
06 Insight
07 Liminality

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Friday, January 15, 2016

Emergence - A Novel on Twitter - Section One, Jim and Kathy

A Private Sorrow, Collected Chapters

Chapter One: Call


Pt. 01, Ch. 01
Kathy answered the phone.
“Hello” she said.
“I need to see you,” said Jim, in his typical tone; detached.
“Café?”
“Yes.”
#Emergence

Chapter Three: Morning

Pt. 01, Ch. 02
“Coffee,” Jim orders.
“Chai;” says Kathy.
They sit in the sun, and read. It is busy.
Jim weeps, and he won’t say why.
#Emergence

Chapter Two: Lies

Pt. 01, Ch. 03
“What’s wrong?”
“I can’t say.”
“Why?”
“You wouldn’t get it…I’m not talking about it.”
“I don’t get it.”
“I said as much.”
#Emergence

Chapter Four: Closure
Pt. 01, Ch. 04
Kathy sensed the emptiness inside her friend; a hollow, where normally there was active awareness, and perceptivity.
#Emergence

Chapter Five: Confusion
Pt. 01, Ch. 05
Now that she was here; Jim was not sure why he asked her to see him. He could not tell her what was going to happen.
#Emergence

Chapter Six: Insight
Pt. 01, Ch. 06
It was clear that Jim had something to tell. Kathy sensed that it was very bad news; for him, for her, and everyone.
#Emergence

Chapter Seven: Liminality
Pt. 01, Ch. 07
They sat with one another; speaking little. Jim enjoyed being with Kathy; their thoughts synched. It felt like home.
#Emergence

Emergence:
Section One, Jim and Kathy
Part One, A Private Sorrow,
Collected Chapters
Section 01, Jim and Kathy
Part 01, A Private Sorrow,
Chapters
01 Call
02 Morning
03 Lies
04 Closure
05 Confusion
06 Insight
07 Liminality
#Emergence
#SuperShortFiction
#365SciFi
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